The Knowing

apathetic rejection

Don’t you know
why I
Do what I do
and I
Take what I take
and I
Have what I have
and I
Had what I had
and I
Believe what I believe
and I
Don’t know you.
 

Reviews

[Ryan D. Mosley]

Wow, absolutely great job in keeping the purpose and having absolutely outstanding meter. We don't seem to know who this speaker is or who she's talking to which adds mystery to the work. The meter of this poem was outstanding, and I could only wish I could put some of it into my poetry. Absolutely loved reading this. Overall: Great Job!

[Wolfwind Words]

It was like a frisbee being thrown and skiped allong the ground with each two lines, till it fell still in the mud at the end
I loved the way this was writen.
I felt the ups and downs like a bouncy road, that came to a dead end!
Great Job!