tremble and quake

love was not the mistake

each give [ takes a little out of me ]

blind lovers take a spin

till there's nothing left within

left with a letter titled

lovers fickle and thin

rather be full then halfway

rather be with a heavy heart 

[ content ]

than juxtaposed with your strangled arms 

pulling me closer and closer 

from myself

bad taste in worse cases

always a hunger

long lost 

[ forged lovers ]

unevenly raveled laces

nothings perfect

worn out patent faces

Author's Note

leave me a note.
let me know how you feel about my gathering
once again
-cheyenne

Reviews

[Mary Jo. Clare]

I really enjoyed this piece. The figurative language and emotional touch really made this poem come alive. Great job!

[cheyenne summer garcia]

thank you so much for your feedback. will be writing more soon.

[cheyenne summer garcia]

much appreciated.
-cheyenne

[FaeryQueen]

whoa rabbid are these images, nice work

[cheyenne summer garcia]

thank you very much sending love