Red Wine

A sultry love poem of passion.

RED WINE

 

Hearing your soft voice

whispering in my ear,
sends shivers down my spine.

As your fingers

entwine with mine,
my mind unwinds.

 

I could be with you

till the end of time.

     Your lips meeting mine,

            your hips embracing mine,
                  soon I know you'll be mine,

as soon as we finish

this bottle of red wine.

Reviews

[BJ]

I’m thrown with you.

The hurt and pain has gone on to long
I caught you with this one and that one
No more lies and cheating I can endure
I thought you love me the pain I will not accept no more.
You want me to be true to you but you are not true to me.
Double standards you have I see.
I told you I would write until I can’t take it anymore.
No my books are not about you I have so much more.
Yeah I am a good woman who deserves the best
I’m tired of the drama let it rest
When I told you to come to my event.
You made me feel like you were the president.
I want be there you said to me.
I cried over the phone as you hung on me
You told me you thought something out there was better for you .
Go right ahead half way brother because I’m threw with you.
You had my heart you were the only man I desired.
You hurt me and set my heart on fire
I hope you are listening since you didn’t come tonight. That’s good
I made up my mind I threw with you for good.
Need I say more go on bout business I don’t want you no more.
I’m threw with you…

Created By Author BJ.Kelly

[Michael of Gilead]

Now I got Red Red Wine stuck in my head!

[alesuriko]

Very romantic, I liked it from beginning to end. The structure is lovely. I especially loved the imagery and the line "your hips embracing mine," Well done!

[BJ]

My sister...

My sister
Created By: BJ.Kelly 04/07/09

My sister you will make it
My sister you’ll go far no matter what you were told so far.
The facts of life can bring us down
But in the end what goes up must come down
My tears that’s been shed over the last two years.
Are dried up, so are my fears
I was told I would be nothing because of my kids.
As I held my head up high, I walked off with a smile
Knowing my dear life would change in a while.
Hearts can get broken, dreams will be shattered
My sister you will make it, and you will.
Don’t ever let anyone tell you that you don’t have the will.
My sister stays strong with all that goodness in thy heart it was taken for granted
Sometimes the light shines different when hearts are broken
The humble woman I was a few years ago
Is back and I’m never letting her go.
There is no shame in thy heart, all my pain was laid to rest.
I am An Author who writes the best.
Give the drama a rest.
To you I must confess
My Heart burns yarns for the best
And the rest is a test for me I am the best.
For all the people that didn’t believe in me
I walk off with smile inside of me.
For this is a real story of a woman's black diary.