Raspberry Girl

A love poem.

Raspberry Girl

 

Raspberry Girl

You make my head swirl,

Your lips smell like honey,

When your hips sway,

They make me feel funny.

 

I want to make

you my honey bunny,

So we can have lots of kids

That keep us both running,

Because each time you twirl,

You make my world go around.

 

I’m in love with the

Raspberry Girl!

Reviews

[sarah]

This is so sweet and beautiful! Great write!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Oh this is delightful. I Loved it. A wonderful read. You penned this beautifully.

[Jibey]

A tasty bit of fun!

[Linear]

Lovely girl pic.

Er I think you need boy on girl to make lots of babies, girl on girl won't work ;0)
Sweet poem well written

[Chris]

LOL...

I can't really say anything else...

Chris

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

this is a deligthful sweet twirl around a heart filled with light festivities~ I absolutely felt like dancing along to the playful rhythm~

[Wicahpi]

This is so whimsical!
Makes me want to get up and go dancing.
And who couldn't love raspberry! :)