tilt-a-whirl

A carnival ride poem.

tilt-a-whirl

 

tilt-a-whirl

how you make twirling

so much fun.

 

with every twirl

I grab the girl

screaming next to me

 

with her curls

and her dimples

she looks to sweet

when she looks my way

 

but I swear

if she hurls on me

while I'm on this ride

 

I might hurl on

the other girl

next to me

Reviews

[Wicahpi]

LoL ewwwwwwwww
Well I been on a ride or two like that
when I was younger, but not now. I'd puke! lol