Hangover

A haiku about hangovers.

 

 

Dry mouth and headaches;

please stop this room from spinning,

hair of the dog helps.

Author's Note

I wrote this after watching the movie The Hangover movie last year. It was a hilarious movie to me!

Reviews

RUHtard!

[alesuriko]

Good haiku, I like the structure and that it's on the right side of the page, gives it more atmosphere and aesthetics for the topic. Well done.

[Michael of Gilead]

Ha ha ha....been there done that got the tee shirt ;)

"Why does my head feel like exploding
Why can't I sit up
Theres vomit on the couch
cigarette burns in the carpet
I must be dead"

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice work

[Liza]

this is unique
to date i haven't read
a haiku on hangovers
pretty cool lol
stops me from drinking too much!