Gentleman's Call
A Poem by
Marie Harrison
A personal ad.
Gentleman’s Call
Currently seeking
A confident,
Intelligent and
Willing companion.
Who runs like
A wild stallion
And doesn’t
Drink gallons
But sports
A six pack
And a firm
And full
Backpack.
A Godly man
Who’s yearning
To show up
To take part
In a romantic waltz
With me from
Start to finish
Showing lots of
Heart throughout
The duration
In and out
Of the dark.
One who smiles
Like the sun
And likes
To have lots
Of fun and who knows
Lots of puns and how
To be a great
Companion.
I’m seeking one who
Will stand-up for me
And let people know
That I’m his number one
No matter what comes.
A man who seeks a life
Of adventure and
High adrenaline time.
One whose mind is open
To the unknown
With a heart of
Hope and passion.
To take my hand
And lead me to beaches
Of fine sugar white sands
And frolic with me with
The dolphins and the
Manatees and will
forever kiss
And tease me,
One who knows
Just how to
Please me.
I’m looking
For a gentleman
Whose heart is true
To peer into
My eyes of Blue.
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One Who would like
To tenderly spoon
With me for
A lifetime
Of dreamtime.
Drop me a line
If it sounds like
You’re this kind
Of guy.
I promise
I’ll make it worth
Your dime and time.
I’ll make you a pie
Of key lime and will
Be your sublime siren
For a lifetime of
Sunshine smiles
And ecstasy sighs.
© 2010 Marie Harrison
Author's Note
This was fun to write! lol
Reviews
What an excellent read. Those are some serious boots that need filling:)
Posted 14 Years Ago
I think this was a good ad to a guy. LOL I loved this poem. I don't think a guy would disappoint you after this write. I liked this a lot. Thanks for sharing. :)
Posted 15 Years Ago
I think this was a good ad to a guy. LOL I loved this poem. I don't think a guy would disappoint you after this write. I liked this a lot. Thanks for sharing. :)
This is a great discription of what we'd hope a gentleman could be. Awesome.
Posted 15 Years Ago
This is a great discription of what we'd hope a gentleman could be. Awesome.
Fun to read too! Poem as personal ad is a fun format.
You've done an excellent job w/the format, managing to be fun and provocative -- and very pleasing to the ear:
"I promise/I’ll make it worth/Your dime and time./I’ll make you a pie/Of key lime and will/Be your sublime siren/For a lifetime of/Sunshine smiles/And ecstasy sighs."
Shiny appealing rhymes, and the first time I've seen "key lime" w/"sublime" -- thus appealing to the spirit and libido and belly brilliantly w/one sound! ;-)
Posted 15 Years Ago
Fun to read too! Poem as personal ad is a fun format.
You've done an excellent job w/the format, managing to be fun and provocative -- and very pleasing to the ear:
"I promise/I’ll make it worth/Your dime and time./I’ll make you a pie/Of key lime and will/Be your sublime siren/For a lifetime of/Sunshine smiles/And ecstasy sighs."
Shiny appealing rhymes, and the first time I've seen "key lime" w/"sublime" -- thus appealing to the spirit and libido and belly brilliantly w/one sound! ;-)
where do I apply, lol, nice work.
Posted 15 Years Ago
where do I apply, lol, nice work.
Wonderful penned.. love the flow and word choices. Great job!
-Coral-
Posted 15 Years Ago
Wonderful penned.. love the flow and word choices. Great job!
-Coral-
I think it is always fun to write!
Nice sweet poem!
Love it
Posted 15 Years Ago
I think it is always fun to write!
Nice sweet poem!
Love it
Sweet poem. I love the innocent and genuine nature of it all.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Sweet poem. I love the innocent and genuine nature of it all.
If only finding love were as easy as putting an ad in the paper, or writing a poem about it on the internet. :) I'm one of those people who's content with being alone, but even though this poem didn't apply to me I could still feel for you and your emotions were pulsing in every word. Its a type of poem that makes people smile, laugh and joke, but when you think about it, when you take it seriously the pain of being lonely must be overwhelming. I really enjoyed reading it nonetheless and it is a beautiful piece that is wonderfully written. Thank you so much for sharing.
-Cathrine
Posted 15 Years Ago
If only finding love were as easy as putting an ad in the paper, or writing a poem about it on the internet. :) I'm one of those people who's content with being alone, but even though this poem didn't apply to me I could still feel for you and your emotions were pulsing in every word. Its a type of poem that makes people smile, laugh and joke, but when you think about it, when you take it seriously the pain of being lonely must be overwhelming. I really enjoyed reading it nonetheless and it is a beautiful piece that is wonderfully written. Thank you so much for sharing.
-Cathrine
Very cute Marie
The payoff for fulfilling the ad sounds great ;)
Posted 15 Years Ago
Very cute Marie
The payoff for fulfilling the ad sounds great ;)
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Added on October 2, 2010
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Marie Harrison Atlanta, GA
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Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance.
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