Gentleman's Call
A Poem by
Marie Harrison
A personal ad.
Gentleman’s Call
Currently seeking
A confident,
Intelligent and
Willing companion.
Who runs like
A wild stallion
And doesn’t
Drink gallons
But sports
A six pack
And a firm
And full
Backpack.
A Godly man
Who’s yearning
To show up
To take part
In a romantic waltz
With me from
Start to finish
Showing lots of
Heart throughout
The duration
In and out
Of the dark.
One who smiles
Like the sun
And likes
To have lots
Of fun and who knows
Lots of puns and how
To be a great
Companion.
I’m seeking one who
Will stand-up for me
And let people know
That I’m his number one
No matter what comes.
A man who seeks a life
Of adventure and
High adrenaline time.
One whose mind is open
To the unknown
With a heart of
Hope and passion.
To take my hand
And lead me to beaches
Of fine sugar white sands
And frolic with me with
The dolphins and the
Manatees and will
forever kiss
And tease me,
One who knows
Just how to
Please me.
I’m looking
For a gentleman
Whose heart is true
To peer into
My eyes of Blue.
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One Who would like
To tenderly spoon
With me for
A lifetime
Of dreamtime.
Drop me a line
If it sounds like
You’re this kind
Of guy.
I promise
I’ll make it worth
Your dime and time.
I’ll make you a pie
Of key lime and will
Be your sublime siren
For a lifetime of
Sunshine smiles
And ecstasy sighs.
© 2010 Marie Harrison
Author's Note
This was fun to write! lol
Reviews
How neat. Loved it.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Fun to read too. He sounds like a winner, hope you find him!
Posted 15 Years Ago
Fun to read too. He sounds like a winner, hope you find him!
Very fun to read:) Excellent poem.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Very fun to read:) Excellent poem.
When I saw 'personal ad' in the description, I didn't expect something so sentimental because of the silly ones for the contest. Was a nice surprise.
Posted 15 Years Ago
When I saw 'personal ad' in the description, I didn't expect something so sentimental because of the silly ones for the contest. Was a nice surprise.
Ya mean there's a guy like that? lol A very
enjoyable read my friend ...
Posted 15 Years Ago
Ya mean there's a guy like that? lol A very
enjoyable read my friend ...
Fun to write, and fun to read. This bounces along with a bubbly cadence that had me smiling the entire way through. Your use of internal rhyme here is impeccable, and accounts for the lighthearted nature of this poem... where do I sign? Hahah, well done Marie.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Fun to write, and fun to read. This bounces along with a bubbly cadence that had me smiling the entire way through. Your use of internal rhyme here is impeccable, and accounts for the lighthearted nature of this poem... where do I sign? Hahah, well done Marie.
For love to last we need that intellectual and emotional stimulation to compliment the physical desires... very nicely done.
Posted 15 Years Ago
For love to last we need that intellectual and emotional stimulation to compliment the physical desires... very nicely done.
Interesting and the picture is cool. lol No such thing though! Lol no one's perfect sadly our dreams aren't so true when dreaming of the perfect companion. You did a nice job writing this keep it up!
Posted 15 Years Ago
Interesting and the picture is cool. lol No such thing though! Lol no one's perfect sadly our dreams aren't so true when dreaming of the perfect companion. You did a nice job writing this keep it up!
The perfect guy ! I would definetly think this was fun to write cause it was certrainly fun to read : ) nice job
Posted 15 Years Ago
The perfect guy ! I would definetly think this was fun to write cause it was certrainly fun to read : ) nice job
Seventh Stanza "And lead me to a beaches", you should remove the "a". I truly enjoyed reading this, it's out of the box and fresh. I think everyone needs hope, without it you just fall into that line of "acceptance". Great poem, I wish you the best.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Seventh Stanza "And lead me to a beaches", you should remove the "a". I truly enjoyed reading this, it's out of the box and fresh. I think everyone needs hope, without it you just fall into that line of "acceptance". Great poem, I wish you the best.
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Added on October 2, 2010
Last Updated on October 3, 2010
Author
Marie Harrison Atlanta, GA
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Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance.
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