A First Wife

A senyru

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

First Wife

She was his gimcrack,

Jewel of the Nile, a king’s dream,

Once trash, future queen.

 

Reviews

[nighttimesnoozer]

oooo badassss

[nono]

OH THAT'S SOO COOL! I like this it's beautiful you did a nice job on it!

[Moonflower]

Brilliant~Jewel of the Nile is a lovely line~

[Norma M Sutton]

This is a nice way to say it.

[M Garcia]

Wow

[Alicia™]

Wow. This poem barely has 25 words, and yet it's so beautiful. Great job!

[Kaotic Barbie]

Great poem in barely any words. Yet the words tell it all and mean so much. Wonderful write. Your a natural.

What a lucky first wife.

[Wondering Mind]

From trash to Queen! I bet she's happy!! Nicely done

[TAO]

Nice... Very nice use of the word, I'd say.