There He Goes!

A poem about deviating from the norm.

 

 

There He Goes!

Dashing about nude,

His bare eddy was steady;

Streaking on the field.

 

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

Lmao!! Awesome write..

[KatiePie]

You are a woman after my own heart writing this. *Applaudes*

[Cynthia]

Wow! Nice Write! I oove this, and I smile(Laugh) as I finish reading this!
Nice Write!

[G. Anderson]

Lmfao! Three little lines painted this vivid picture in my mind...
Excellent balance between your imagery and the usage of the readers imagination.

Gage

[Norma M Sutton]

lol Love it. Ray Stevens would too lol

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Haha...I loved this poem. It all seems so cool and fun, until he
faces the consequences of his actions..lol. I dont even want
to think about it.

[Charles]

And the nut gets tazed. What a great show of lunacy. Nice read.

[MoonlightIce]

Very comedy like!(: HAHA

[The Analog Kid]

I love it. The streaker is everywhere. At graduations, political events, sporting events. Nobody ignores him!

[Dark Empress]

I love it, thanks for the laugh today :) I needed it.