Earthquake

A earth shifting senyru.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Earthquake

God showed his anger;

The earth’s crust palpitated,

Haiti’s land buckled.

 

Reviews

[Short.Nerd]

Probably true!

Nice write(:

[Mauricio Montoya]

and they say theres more to come.
Excellent write.

[Black Cat Fever]

Very up to date and probably true.

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relevant..and well said

[Alicia Schroeder]

Greatly put.

[Michael of Gilead]

And so it did....and it's still not been fixed.

[M Garcia]

Very true. I've read what happened, seen what happened. Captured it well.

[Tina Kline]

Wow, this is perfect! You captured the whole story in those three lines. Impressive!

[Dark Empress]

This is a very neat poem. Gives you a view from a different angle. God definitely works in mysterious ways, that's for sure. :) thanks for sharing

[JanieB]

God works in mysterious ways. I don't think God was angry though. Are you?