Trapeze Wire

A twisting poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Trapeze Wire

Flips, twisting mid-air:

Lissome acrobat performs;

Awe-struck audience.

 

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

I would have loved it if you took my imagination further to more various serk (circus) performances, but this one impresses too. nice flash of tricks, talent, and fun.

[Mauricio Montoya]

There’s a thin line between the performer and the audience.

[Robin]

wonderful verbal image

[M Garcia]

Nicely done! I can see this in my head.

[Black Cat Fever]

Excellent. Good use of the WOTD!

[Tina Kline]

Perfect! The fun filled joy the circus of a by gone era!

[MuSe Ampoule]

Awesome. I can tell this was done with the 'greatest of ease'!

[Lauren Beth]

Nice write...you truly capture the essence of a trapeze artist in so few words...I can see it. Beautiful!

[Short.Nerd]

Awesome job!

[Norma M Sutton]

Nicely done.