Murdered

A life changing moment.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Murdered

Life’s sparkle buzzed, danced;

Her life absconded by gun,

Soul departed earth.

Reviews

[luciddreamer]

I use to be divided on the gun issue, being from the south you know. After many tragedies, unfortunately, I know longer am. It is an evil piece of metal with never a good intention....sorry I usually don't let things get to me ....Well Needed and great write :)

[JanieB]

Great haiku.

[Michael of Gilead]

Ka-pow, intense flash, in a second it's done

[tynamite]

I like how the girl has her tongue out in the image.

[YouoweYoupay]

Powerful indeed. Life can pass by and vanish as fast as a breeze does. Nice image chosen above. lol.

[Cafe Reader]

Powerful, very powerful!

[Cynthia]

It's a powerful poem written by such a few words!
Really, I hate guns too, they are a sigh of dealth to me...
Great Poem!

[TAO]

I hate guns... Nicely done, Ms. Marie.

[sarah]

Wow this really powerful for being so short! good job

[Light]

soul departed Earth....to where? i love how it almost doesn't end. it's not a sad poem yet it talks about death. it is somewhat gloomy but i get a little sense of hope. No one ever really dies...soul departed Earth! i liked this write and the concepts in it or the ones that i've inferred into it...lmao

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

So sad that some people can just kill without rhyme and the innocent suffer without reason.