Greedy B*****d

A selfish poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Greedy B*****d

Hours of sex filled him;

His greed unsatiated,

Indulgence he loved.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Well, you said what you had to .. reckon you indulged in some revenge, my friend! :))

[The Analog Kid]

Very bold and accusitory tone. Perfect. Sounds like you know someone like this...lol!

[Goodbye]

Hmmm, where did you get the inspiration? LOL! Excellence, Marie - excellence!

[Tina Kline]

Love this, sounds like a man, for sure, but a very unkind one too.

[Samantha]

short, sweet, and powerful. More of a saying almost than a poem, but i like it all the same.

[MuSe Ampoule]

'nough said. Great write.

[Liza]

i enjoyed this but it left me wanting more...maybe i'm greedy :)

[Mauricio Montoya]

thi guy got a one track mind.
nice work.

[luciddreamer]

Love it :)
Peace
Robin

[tynamite]

The sentences are as crass and abrupt as the swear word.