Phoenix In The Wind

A poem of new beginnings and new dreams.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Phoenix In The Wind

My dreams have died

Now I bow my head to sigh

 

Night is when I cry

Day is my rebuilding time

 

Too young to die

Too old to ask why

 

Now’s my time to fly

That’s why I have to try

 

I’m a phoenix in the wind

Flying towards the setting sun

To escape my sins

 

 

 

Author's Note

I don't know why but writing this poem gave me peace.

Reviews

[Alicia™]

This is such a haunting poem...

[emmajoy]

Seeing the words in front of you is like half way understanding the pain - it's a form of exorcism .. you've jumped the hurdle. Great writing, Marie .. and all being well, the peace will continue, love.

[Art Sun]

nice work...

self expression is the motivator...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I think I know why you wrote it... self motivation... we must keep ourselves convinced if we want others to believe... very inspiring work.

[Eric Cox]

Beautiful poem. Love the hope rising. Cool pen upon this piece.

[Tina Kline]

I can see why, its full of hope. Its very beautiful as well. I love it!

[TAO]

Well done. One thing I would take issue with; you're never too old to ask why. Now, too omnipotent, perhaps, but never too old ;) Seriously though, I can see why this poem would bring you peace, and you are deserving of that peace, Ms.

[Goodbye]

A lovely poem of surrender - at least that 's what it means to me. That willingness to be led that we've talked about.

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice work.

[JanieB]

Yes..I can understand why.