Rush Hour

A heavy traffic poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Rush Hour

Frenetic traffic;

Distracted drivers squeal tires,

Traffic kills people.

 

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You got that right!

[India Brooks]

Truly captures driving in just three lines! Great poem :)

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This is why I hate driving...give me an open road any day..

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

lmao. The Irony here is just too perfect!
I totally get it...

Awesome, Sweet Marie!

[Goodbye]

Ouch!

[YouoweYoupay]

I agree with Norma. Speeding on the road is speeding to death.

[Norma M Sutton]

Short and to the point.

[Sunny Skye]

yep this poem is sooo true.

[Linear]

The rush hour, people scatter in frantic scurry, no time to stop no time to look, eyes glazed over in anger and rage, those bloody lights are against me again!

[Shante Payne]

Yes rush hour is ridiculous! especially here in atlanta. You have your rubber neckers, those that are eating, those on the phone...just caous and no one is themselves. Great write. Short but amazing.