"Zinger"

Head trauma.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“Zinger”

Concussion stunned me;

Obfuscated for a year,

Eventually healed.

 

 

Reviews

[Talkativeted]

Words match picture perfectly.

[M Garcia]

So much in so few words. Definitely a gift that you have for writing. Thanks for sharing this painful subject.

[Michael of Gilead]

The more we learn about these, the longer it seems one needs to recover

[emmajoy]

A drama in few words .. dramatically brief; more would have killed this stone dead.

[Art Sun]

Thats a long time to be stunned by a concussion...

[Jibey]

Powerful pic.. and words that say it

[nono]

This is similar to what my book is about "The Blinding Truth". She has a tumor, and goes blind in the process. This is amazing. It's tragic, and its detailed for something so short. It really does amaze me how awesome your haiku's are!!
p.s. I changed my name and everything else again so you might be confused on who I am lol

[JanieB]

Beautifully written haiku.
Tragic words.

[TAO]

Now...this sounds very painful...too painful.

[sarah]

so sad