"Zinger"

Head trauma.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“Zinger”

Concussion stunned me;

Obfuscated for a year,

Eventually healed.

 

 

Reviews

[Goodbye]

I hope the other guy looked worse!

[Rick Puetter]

Hi Marie,

Isn't it amazing that one can obfuscate for a year. A zinger should clear the mind. Amazing that sometimes it doesn't.

Nicely penned.

Best regards,

Rick

P.S. I see from this and many of your other poems that you are a fan of the hiku form. Your use is very unusual and quite nice. Greatly enjoyed.

[Short.Nerd]

Great poem!

[hannajade]

Ouch:(,,but nice poem!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

What a poem that has a deep with meaning!

[Michael X]

Wow Marie, that looks obviously painful, I can't image, the brilliant way
you wrote the poem is, you capture the essense :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This couldnt have been any fun.
Nicely written though.

[Light]

that doesn't look pleasant! i am actually quite impressed with this! i had to go to dictionary.com (no, they're not paying me for this plug. i do it out of genuine love for "the man;" who's keeping us down $1 at a time ...lmao) to look up "obfuscated;" i couldn't even figure out what it was based on syntax. i had no idea! umm....now i'm rambling and this has far drifted from a typical review...lol, but here we are none-the-less

-light-