Disco Ball

A first dance poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Disco Ball

Frenetic feet tap;

Across the room

Shy boys gather,

First dance jitters crawl.

 

Reviews

[M Garcia]

I was shy and still am. Don't like dancing period, but nicely written.

[Linear]

Ah i was never the shy type, i guess they lost out for a while.

[Michael of Gilead]

that brings back memories :)

[Short.Nerd]

Love it! Great job!

[emmajoy]

Clever on all counts, my friend .. succinct, sincere, sweet

[Jibey]

Memories of school dances...hehehe

[Undying Glory]

wow nice work here, thought this was really interesting. great job

[sarah]

DISCO BABY! lol

[Mauricio Montoya]

been there done that, i was one of those guys. still am kanda

[MuSe Ampoule]

Fun read! great job!