Death Bed

A dying moment.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Death Bed

Lucid moments came

His loved ones

 Surrounded him,

His final hour passed.

 

 

Reviews

[Linear]

Bugger, wonder what he said in his final lucid moments?

[Doug Ordunio]

/nice, but lose the semicolon, and make

the word surrounded, not surrounding. :-)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very sad but comforting too because love ones surrounding him!

[Tina Kline]

This is very good but very sad. But not too many people have loved ones around them when they pass.

[Jibey]

I was intrigued by the caption on the cartoon... 'ridin dertay' - does it mean what I am thinking? Maybe he was dying in hope...

[Michael X]

breathtaking really, it has a subtler impact that speaks volumes,
you have a knack for for crafting, stunning, powerful job :)

[Alicia Schroeder]

Greatly put into words.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Its sad to see a loved one staring at whats
on the other side. Nice work.

[TAO]

Sounds like a happy enough death. Nice use of the word. In fact, perfect use of the word (in my book, anyway).

[Norma M Sutton]

I like this one.