The Damned

A cursed poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Damned

Spirits haunted me

Muffled susurrous chilled me

Iced fingers touched me

 

Reviews

[James Bonner]

This is haunting, and brilliant. Fantastic poem.

[Mauricio Montoya]

whoa!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You gave me goosebumps!
Scary. Scary.

[Poetic Beauty]

I don't think I would want iced fingers to touch me.

[Norma M Sutton]

Oh MY! That sent shivers up my spine!

[Kymoo]

I believe you are being awakened by the dead. Something you fear. I love the word susurrous, it is more alive with sound than its meaning.

[Sunny Skye]

Good poem i agree with Doug Orunio

[Doug Ordunio]

I like what you plan to do here, but since susurrous is an adjective, it doesn't seem right to me. On the other hand, "susurrations" the noun form of the word seems OK. "Muffled susurrations chilled" would work in the context of this poem, and it would get rid of the second "me". Sorry that I'm such a word "nut" Marie.

[YouoweYoupay]

I can describe it as Spine-tickling, lol, if that makes any sense. Awesome old hag.

[Cynthia]

Great write!