His Garden

A botanical poem.

 

His Garden

Thistles prick and tear at my skin

Trying to escape to a safe protective den

Who knows what darkness hides within

Nothing is safe in his garden

 

Reviews

[♥(heatherawesome..]

This is a lovely buat also a wonderful poem.

[Alicia™]

I read a book with a garden like this once...

[Solidad]

The flow in this is quite amazing. Seeing as how I added it to my library as a 'favorite' that should speak volumes =)

[Tina Kline]

Nicely dark and sinister. You never know what's lurking in gardens!

[JanieB]

Thought provoking. Nice rhyming poem.

[Linear]

One needs to find out just what lurks within, a most lovely poem

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love it, great rythm and flow!

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"Who knows what darkness hides within
Nothing is safe in his garden"
~~well articulated and cleverly created Marie~~~
(though provoking indeed !!!)

:)

[Adam :P]

thats great and rhythm is wonderfull!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is really intense.
Its suspenseful and gave me a chill.