Summer Drifts As Winter Slides

Changing of the elements

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Summer Drifts As Winter Slides

White flakes of coconut

Shower me all year long

 

Bells ring-a-ling-a-dong

For the church bells

Play Christ’s song

 

Surfboards turn to sleds

As we drift down the mountain

Till our pants are water logged

 

Chocolate ice cream turns

To hot chocolate as

Little hearts dream

By the yuletide logs

 

Swim suits magically

Appear as ski suits

As up the snow lift jogs

 

Surf’s up kitty as

Snow is falling

Down on this winter dog

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Don't know where this came from

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Great job!

[Undying Glory]

interesting work, what a time warp this poem is! i sure loved this, this has bent the space-time continuum! (at least in our heads!)
awesome work! this was so unique!

[Alicia Schroeder]

THis was awesome!!

[Twilight]

It sounds as if those memories of a past Christimas, are still fresh in your mind! Or, this reflects how a Christmas should be - in the writer's view? Either way, it's a nice read with a few moments of humour. Simple, warm and speaks from the heart x

[Goodbye]

Oh this is just so much fun! How different from Chicago your Holiday times are - ain't nothing melting here any time soon!

[*skittlez*]

i really really like this poem alot i think it is amazing

[Tina Kline]

I like it, it describes and contrasts the changing season very well.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Nice imagery. I could hear the waves crashing.
I enjoyed how you captured the change as it
happened.

[hannajade]

very interesting!!! nice and creative and magical:)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very creative write! I love it because you used summer that I love and then winter which I love!