Peaceful Christmas

Peaceful actions of the seasons stir

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Peaceful Christmas

Candlelight flickers

With shadows on the wall

 

Guitar strums

Pierce the air

 

Kitten slinks across

The room with tinsel

In her mouth

 

While Christmas unwraps

The night away

 

Reviews

[Alicia™]

Hi little kitty! What's your cat's name? :)

[Undying Glory]

knew i should have reviewed this earlier. great work here! i sure hope to see more of this! good job

[Mauricio Montoya]

Awesome!

[Short.Nerd]

Wonderful!

[Tina Kline]

Very nice, has a rather peaceful air to it. I really like the kitten pic you used on this piece.

[tynamite]

I like the festive description in this. It's got the vibe.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love your christmas poems!

[Liza]

i like that you chose a cat to represent peace :) they are very graceful and quiet creatures :)

[Michael of Gilead]

Wouldn't be so relaxing...I'd have to chase the kitten to get the tinsle away from it...it would hide in the shadows....I'm sure I'd bump my head

[Twilight]

Too short by far, and it does not rhyme or follow a true poetic structure. Even so, it is quite amusing and warm! Arguably, perhaps a reasonably effective attempt at self-expression. Either way, I'm sure that Marie quite enjoyed writing it!