Consume Me

A snow poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Consume Me

White mystical snow

Like sugar I yearn

To melt and

Become one

With you

 

Carry me away

To a better world

Where purity reigns

 

Never land magic swirls

And blows about

Freely in the

Blistery air

 

Where joyous

Smiles adorn all faces

 

Erase my

Own monotony

 

Clear pain and fear

From my memory

 

Inject me into a

Hard packed snowball

And Thrust me

Into the air with

Your power force

 

Consume me

 

 

Author's Note

I was watching the snow fall as I was walking a dog in it today. These thoughts came to me as I watched the snow. I just wanted to become like the snow. I wanted it to absorb me so a piece of me could be at peace forever.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When we get lost in moments with loved ones our troubles can feel miles away.

[Jibey]

I guess we all feel like melting away from time to time... You used the idea of the snow and the snowball well... I can think of other ways of melting...

[Blake Q Hatfield]

Interesting take on snow. I personally can't stand the stuff, but this paints a lovely picture of the lighter side of the snow. How it can it can change the look of a scene when it lands and sticks, that warm feeling of Christmas time evoked from that image. The purity of the total white the snow brings. It is like a cleansing of the land, a new day because it's completely different, like a cold version of a chili pepper spicing things up.

[Cynthia]

Very nice written!
'White mystical snow
Like sugar I yearn
To melt and
Become one
With you'
Very outstanding start of this beautiful poem!!!!
I wish to be snow too, they look like so peaceful and happy all the time!
I love the image you got for this poem, it's lovely!