Goddess On Pink Toes

A ballet poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Goddess On Pink Toes

How you twinkle on your toes

You spin, giving everyone a show

Soaring through the falling snow

Like a mighty eagle with pointed toes

Spinning round and round as the clouds close

You’re a goddess in the snow

Dancing on your pink toes

Where the wind will carry you,

Who knows?

He throws you wherever you go

You’re my goddess on pink toes

Author's Note

Love ballet

Reviews

[Magdelena]

This was a sheer delight my friend. Loving the words and images.. Oh yea!

Hugs
Mags xx

[SpokenWord]

I have always wondered if it hurts to stand on your tippy toes like that. Very cute poem that rolled off the tongue very easily like a ballerina performing it for our pleasure. Wonderful write.

[Abbie]

very nice job lol


100/100

[Blake Q Hatfield]

Beautifully done. A nice picture of the beauty of the ballet dancer.

[Short.Nerd]

Love it! (: G reat job

[Tina Kline]

This sure creates a lovely picture of a ballerina. It's delight and and full of joy!

[Mauricio Montoya]

like poetry it's an art.

[Twilight]

Curious! This reads, as if the goddess described is actually a male! Either way, one has to speculate regarding the identity of the "he", in this piece! Well, like a ballerina, a woman can be graceful and a true beauty! Sometimes, like ballerinas, a few ladies seem to regard themselves as goddesses! Of course, I am exaggerating, but some really do give the impression that they see something divine in themselves - only because they happen to have been blessed with physical beauty. Simple, but fun to read - thankyou!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this is a beautiful description of such a beautiful art! i adore this piece!