Turquoise Summers

A lazy summer chill poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Turquoise Summers

Summer sloth am I

Languid sucker for trash-reading in the sun

Lazy is my native tongue

Crack of cold Corona on the dock, makes me run

August Ash is my given name

I wear my bikini low as I move turquoise slow

Summer fun recall is my only golden glow

 

Reviews

[KAREN]

I felt the sun shining down on me, good write!

[Norma M Sutton]

A different look at summer.

[Dilan Gray]

I love this, you can imagine it all. My favorite part was "lazy is my native tongue"! Great poem!!!

[JanieB]

Marie..this is heavenly to read. Excellent write.
I adore your photo, it fits in perfectly. Bravo!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very jazzy poem... very upbeat and cool... brings a rush of many summer days of the past.

[Yana]

This is a cute poem! It makes me think of how much I CAN'T WAIT for Summer 2011! :) Nice Job!

[Samantha (:]

I really like this, especially the title. A few places where I didn't quite feel the flow, and very brief but, overall, well done. (:

[Robin]

great use of color and the flow has that touch of a few Corona's ~

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Whew! I cant wait.

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"Languid sucker for trash-reading in the sun" ~
..."Coronas-bikinis low-Summer fun-golden glow"

~a wonderful "lazy summer chill poem"~

james