Sweat

A moist poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sweat

Beads of moisture form

Warm wet fluid that makes You glide

Salty to the tongue

Reviews

[Michael Todd]

wow, as I have said before. You say so much in such beautifully constructed lines.
Great.

[SpokenWord]

Oh short and yet so sensual I see. I think you made your point here loud and clear. :)

[Karina Longo]

Amazingly well-descriptive even though it's a short poem I think it couldn't be any better if it was longer.

[GTVile]

Excellent in all regards.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

WoW! Nuff said!

[Gone]

Nice write. BTW where did you get that picture of me? LOL!