Pinata

a stuffed poem of angst

piñata

how I wish you were

a statue of david

piñata that I could

strike over and over

with a baseball bat

 

i’d watch you sway

back and forth

and all around

with your pink guts

of bubble-gum

pieces hanging out

 

what a productive

way to spend

my day

beating the crap

out of you

Reviews

[Doug Ordunio]

This is hysterical. I love it--I know just what you mean!

[Michael of Gilead]

Issues?

[M.Babu]

haha brightened my morning this one :D

Thanks for this.

~M.Babu~

[Charles]

LOL...Hey lady, watch where you swing that thing!

[GridLok]

Fun and fantasy in a fury-filled frolic!

[MS. BABy]

lol....loved it....marie u r the bomb....

[Jupiter Jazz]

Lol!!

"what a productive

way to spend

my day

beating the crap

out of you"

HA!! Classic

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Beautiful write........ logic and humorous mixed flavour of bubble gum.

[KAREN]

Hahahahaha! Nice humorous write!

[WindSong]

It's a relative piece of work, as well as insightful!