Awaken Me

my love for ballet dancing and playing the cello

Awaken Me

Deep chords

Of a solemn cello

Chiseling swiftly up

And down the scales

Stir raw emotions

Asleep in me

 

Gliding my feet

Back and forth

Swiftly, like a

Hummingbird just

Learning to fly

 

My satin toes

Make rhythmic

Thrusts against

The hardwoods,

As my arms

Soar through

The air

 

Strings

Of the cello

Overtake

Me

 

They cast

Their spell on

My spirit

 

Rich tones

Stoke the glowing

Embers of my

Soul

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Very beautiful. The love of dance is strong in this one.

[Shep]

I can hear the sweet music now.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"Rich tones
Stoke the glowing
Embers of my
Soul"

I simply ADORE the wording of those lines!

[KINGFAN]

i like it! its personal, very unique style of writing

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

This is very beautiful. I love it! The way you describe everything, I can imagine it clearly in my mind.

[Ruth]

Oh this is so lovely :) A combination that is so hard not to love...everything and I mean everything about this is divine hon!
xx

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The fierce element of noxious emotion pours from your pen, a great read, well done.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Awwwww ! "Rich tones stoke the glowing
embers of my soul". How nice. Kind of
like the song of the hummngbird.
Lay it on us. Your readers can take all
of this you can dish out.
Great writing .
----- Eagle Cruagh

[Jupiter Jazz]

I've always loved the deep rich sounds of the cello. Beautiful instrument. You portrayed it nicely

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Lovely and oh so musical. I adore the font you used :)