alone in the rain

alone i was left

outside

in the rain

my heart is crying out

to be saved

my body is breaking down

alone i lay on the ground

just waiting to drown

hour passed no one came

alone still

for ever to be

never to be happy

always to be crying

slowly dying

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Rebecca Rogers]

This is true for a lot of people who feel alone. I like the imagery of being in the rain, and how dreary and sad it makes one feel. Nice work! :)