my life is in my dreams

my life is in my dreams

A Poem by chiisu
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one note i do not hurt myslef i write because i dont want to hurt myself or others and music helps alot...this is how my pent up anger and depression get out....just wanted to clarify it....

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lost forever in my fears
my life in in my dreams
nothing there is real though
when i wake
my i know my dreams where fake
my real life is a shock
peoples words hurt
no matter what i may say
they hurt in many ways
i know you don't really love me anyway
my life i want is in my dreams
but non of that is real
but some day maybe i can believe you
look me in the eyes and tell me you love me
only then will my dreams be real
i want to know is you love me
when you say it you mean it
not just say it to make me feel better

© 2009 chiisu


Author's Note

chiisu
comment and you will be awesome in my book -^^-

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Again, nice poem. Great flow. =) The only difference between me and your description was that I DID hurt myself. But, never let yourself slip that far. That's how I started. Lol, nice write though.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on January 20, 2009

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