Misused love

I walk a lonely road
back turned against the world
i search for a place most people
call home.

Memories of a troubled past
finally came back to hunt me at last 
was it love or lust
all i know is it wasn't enough

Now i ask  myself can
we ever return to 
that place call trust

We were once a reflection 
of perfection ,but
now i only see a 
mirrored image of rejection. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[KidJunior]

Wow i love it. Its just the right length, and you got your point across nicely.

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I like it!! Tight rhyme...and eloquently put..

[momo]

very good write. i enjoy it because ive been in this situation before and i can just relate to it so perfectly well done!

[Aven]

except for two minor technical problems in "back to haunt me" and "place called trust" it's a really good poem. what is it about perfection that makes us crumble? we often reject something or someone on the basis that he/she or it is not good enough, but what is good enough? seek perfection and it's a lonely walk ahead of you.

Great write! :)