STOP!

I'm hurting but  

just not showing 

the words I don't

say seem to cut deeper

than a doubled bladed 

knife

I cry because 

it seems like

life is just

passing me by

and I'm slowly 

loosing that inner

child

I can no longer 

smile cause sorrow

fills my insides

gasping for love

but hate is the 

only thing I 

can inhale

For happiness no 

longer registers to

me,it only

comes across as pain...

Author's Note

WELL.....

Reviews

[momo]

WELL....very good write! such strong emotions yet so relateable very good!

[.]

Kind of sad but well expressed

[Julie Beth]

this was amazing good write :)

[Aven]

very interesting, the way that you chopped it up... at times it seems so wrong, but feels so right. :D

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

i like it very much i felt the emotion in this good job.