{CINQUAIN}

Fake-friends

  Deceivers,actors

  Pretending,backstabbing  lying 

   Fall back fake b*****s 

      DEUCES 

Author's Note

TELL me what you think ^_^

Reviews

[momo]

short sweet whats interesting though is how it cuts straight to the point without even doing so..like youre not saying theyre a******s youre describing it through details..very nice!

[Aven]

I think it says alot in it's brevity... I mean, there is no reason to complicate this... it's just how you felt at the time, am I right? fake b*****s are rarely mentioned in poetry, but I'm a fan of rap so it strikes a chord with me. ;)

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

i think it is ok not my favorite but ok..

~SK