Pain of a Shadow

something i came up with randomly

Pain of a shadow, Great and tall

Fury and anger, pure and strong.

Under the bed, behind the tree.

Im inside your shadow with pain me.

Pain of a shadow, like dust in the wind,

It breezes and blows, and always comes in

In the sky, above the ground

I write it all down with the ink from my pen.

Pain of a shadow, great and tall,

Pain of a shadow, showered in awe.

Under the bed, behind the tree

Pain in my head and pain in me.

 

Walking up and walking down

walking in circles, round and round

I am who I am, no matter what is said

Im inside my shadow with pain in my head

Reviews

I like this a lot, amazing, and makes someone think

[TheKaylaPup]

I really like it, its cool. but the last line in the first stanza doesn't make sense... "I'm inside your shadow with pain me"

[Elizabeth Slaght]

I like this its short but makes your brain work

[StoryTailor]

This makes me think. I like it.