somewhere

im siting here waiting for my dad to pick me up and just started typing and this is what came out! i hope you like it.

 somewhere in the dark

you are out there

smiling back at me

 

somewhere in my mind

you are with me

like we used to be

 

I see your face

I see your eyes

I see the way look at me and smile

 

And somewhere in my heart you are still there

and I know I love you

Reviews

[MalkavianDelirium]

Very nice. A simple little piece that conveys alot of emotion from such a small volume. Even as a spontaneous piece, it's very well put together :)

[StoryTailor]

I like this. It says a lot in a little amount. Well done Dobe! Hahaha!

[Poeticpiers]

spontaneous outpouring of inner thoughts and hopes Well presented