will you come back?

will you come back

they sent you away

i hug you once

your gone the next day

tenthousand miles away

please come back to me

you cant be replaced

no matter what i do

you'll still be there for me

forever and always

my hero in life

 

will you come back

to were you belong

they know nothing

nothing at all

i miss your humor

so much like my own

i wish you were here

with me again

forever and always

my hero in life

Reviews

[Marlena]

Very beautiful, great work expressing yourself in this. I feel for you.

[Cassandra D.]

This actually almost made me tear up!
This was very beautiful and sweet. I loved it.
[it's one of my favorites now]

[~LeeAnn~]

It is hard to miss someone, who you need so much....splendid write

[StoryTailor]

Nice poem. No joke it really is.
Even though we're supposed to be ignoring each other I had to say that much.