FADING AWAY

 

 

It's as if all the sunshine fade away at once

My head spins like the world

Afraid not to catch up with the speed

My hand touches the floor,

Before my head reaches the cold stone

 

I suddenly feel my eyes closed

I see the blackness

Afraid not to be able to escape from it

I sense the cold,

I face the bold...

 

I can sense the blowing above

Murmurs shimmering in the wind

Afraid not to be heard

Drowning deeper,

I search desperately for an image, I've longly known

 

I am trying hard to see it again

Desperate to catch a last glimpse

Afraid not to have the courage to see it again

'Cause I'm losing you

My eyes won't touch yours again...

                       

         for someone I've already lost...

Reviews

[nadya]

this is beautiful and touching. love it!

[Wicahpi]

reminds me of the song...
"Hold on, hold on to yourself,
cause this is gonna hurt like hell"
by Sarah Maclaughlin (I always spell
her last name wrong, sorry).

[Tori]

Wow, this is really deep. The emotion is powerful and moving. Excellent, excellent job!

[Tallulah]

thats so sad and emotional. I love it. Great job.
It's as if all the sunshine fade away at once
^my fave line.