free

New stuff.

to persevere through epic fear,

a prison of the mind,

the icy valve of my resolve

will melt so i can find,

inside of me,

in spite of me,

a sentimental entity,

a past with lasting memory

no longer left behind.

-CV

Reviews

[Lathen Griffiths]

Nice rhythm and flow here Ch66is. I liked the switch to rhyming with more syllables towards the end also.

regards
Lathen

[MuSe Ampoule]

Good flow and meter with this...though the brevity leaves one wanting more.

[Legion]

Like the flow of this. Kudos.