yearning

perhaps i have grown too sweet for you and i 
is it true that those with impure actions recive the purist of hearts???
for us i prey not
i remember when i first told you "i love you" ....ill never foget how happy you looked
or long we locked lips in the corner and how willing you were to stand by me
it seems now that i have grown more attached to you, and you less attached to me,
more and more deeply my sadness grows to see you next to me only to realize that this is some distateful dream
no more butterflys, no more sighs, no more fluttering world growing side by side, 
just us
which in the end is all i want
all i wish for 
all i have
thank you.

Reviews

[Hanan_Maliah]

I must say this poem is appreciated...mostly because I feel so many of these same feelings. I have often found that love once given with an open heart is then open to pain...100% is often one-sided...continue my friend!

[Jae]

more and more deepl my sadness grows to see you next to me only to realize that this is some distateful dream.
you forgot a "y" in deeply.
but this is very lovely. it shows the love and compassion you have for her.
its very sweet.

~Rem