Haiku 1

I made this one day for a homework assignment. Enjoy!

Still my beating heart

 

Pumping in my lonely chest

 

This thing is not love

Reviews

[Cat]

Wow! Truly a beautiful work of art

[lori c]

such intuitive wisdom in three short lines. the last line is such a twist. i love it. well executed. hope you got an A.

[imnoromeo215]

huh u know i saw this and thought three lines not very impressive then i read it sooo short but soo good its so simple its brilliant great work