Before there is hope

just a poem I came up with when I couldnt sleep

Acheing hearts of fury

Blinding my own site

Hateful thoughts of worry

That I can't see or fight

 

...and then hope...

 

 

 

Author's Note

I don't know if I wan to finish this one yet.. I think I might just leave it as is, so don't be too confused please! Be as brutal as you want!

Reviews

[Renee Zepeda]

Leave it, it simple yet has some power to it.

[Mr. Lopez]

JR ? My friends have been known to also call me JR. I think that you are on to something here. I liked what you've done with this but I think that it can be expanded to grow into something more . Just my oppinion. I would'nt be reviewing this if i did'nt think it was good. I very much so liked it !

[Dawn]

If you wrote this when you couldnt sleep, bless sometimes I do the same. I think its lovely as it is
Dawn