Rosaline

I stood beneath

A mourning moon

All veiled in darkest black

And in my hand

I held a rose

And dreams to bring him back

 

The flowers yellow petals

Stood out against

Dark skies

I knew not

That he watched me then

Well hid in his disguise

 

As ancient grief

Shook well my frame

New daylight dawned behind

And when I turned

To great it

A vision took my mind

 

He stood there silhouetted

Against this breaking dawn

And knowing it a vision

I felt my heart re-torn

 

But up he stepped

And took the rose

His fingers brushing mine

And breathed my name

Against my ear

 

‘My sweetest Rosaline’

Reviews

[EMP]

claire, are you okay? :P it rhymes, it's happy... it's not you, but i tell you something that tells it's you... it's amazing :) i love it :)

He stood there silhouetted
Against this breaking dawn
And knowing it a vision
I felt my heart re-torn

awesome :) xx

[THEB.F.G]

fair play, i like this alot :)

[Beatrice Mars]

Ooh I love this. I love the imagery

I stood beneath
A mourning moon
All veiled in darkest black
And in my hand
I held a rose
And dreams to bring him back

I love this, and hey, it's happy!