For One In Your Shoes

Eyes closed to

This world

As they stare at things

Unseen

By all

Save yourself

 

This must be a

Lonely existence

For one in your shoes

Reviews

[EMP]

spooky... well i think it is. nice one, i reallllyyyy like this, it's kinda chilling and short, straight to the point, awesome :)

[karmic]

This reminds me of my friend's poetry. Short, but has you think for a while. This is really good. Keep it up.

[Simone]

awesome poem. It's an intersting style but one that I truely like. Great job- keep it up.