The Ice (What A Slip Up)

Don’t anger the ice

‘Cause it will get you back

 

All your joking

And ice cracking

Was what lead to your demise

 

You slipped on your own

Foolishness

 

And now

You’ve got what you deserved

A fork in your back

And a broken flask

 

Don’t anger the ice

‘Cause you’ll regret it

(If you live that long)

 

 

You smashed it up

And got what you deserved

 

What a slip up that was.

Reviews

[Beatrice Mars]

All your joking
And ice cracking

I love this, all the different ideas that formed in my head! Lovely and sinister (which i think might be the word to describe your wirting in future!)