Pineapple

You lay there

Silently and

I envy you

Your sweetness

 

You’re cut into

Wide smiles

And I stab your heart

Watching the

Juice that bubbles

Up around the wound

 

You don’t even complain

As you continue

To smile brightly

Like my attack is nothing

 

And I have to say

I admire your lack of

Self preservation

 

I lift your flesh

To my lips

 

The sweetness overwhelms

As I devour you

 

 

 

 

You’re gone now

And I’m left

Picking my teeth

 

Your sweet, sweet revenge.

Reviews

[Beatrice Mars]

I was going to say I love your desriptions, but it's not exactly a desciption...but then again it sort of is...you could make anything interesting and make anything in to some sort of war/battle/horrible situation, even if it included sweet fruit! I love the last stanza! The idea that the pinapple knows it will be eaten, so it leaves this final trap!

[EMP]

this is amazing claire, really really powerful... scary :C but I loved this so much

"the sweetness overwhelms
As I devour you"

brillian xx