Can't Let This Drop

Narrowed eyes

Sensing lies

Fingers tap

Nails snap

Fists clench

To firmly wrench

But you stand resolute

 

Lips curl

Hands unfurl

But I won’t stop

Won’t let this drop

 

You smile

It’s not your style

But you’ll fight back

If I attack

 

 

I lift a hand

Clenched in a fist

You understand

You get the gist

 

While I’m alive

I’ll never stop

While I’ve got drive

Can’t let this drop

Reviews

[Beatrice Mars]

I love this! The rhythm is perfect for the angry feeling that just resonates from this! (Oh dear that sounded pretentious....) Why are your poems angry all the time by the way???

[Joe]

THis is a great poem. your rhythm and rhyme really make the piece flow well. Great job! Keep it up!