Trace Your Heart Over My Own

I’LL smile as I let my

Fingers TRACE your skin

Eyes trace YOUR face

 

My HEART in my chest

Rolls OVER

And I twine MY fingers

Through your OWN.

 

* * * *

 

The night is dark

As nights are prone to be

And I lie

Flat on my back

So the tears drip into my ears

Among these twisted blankets

Which smell like you

 

And I dream

You trace your heart over my own

Reviews

[Eira Anchor]

why are you so talented? It well pisses me off. you could so be a writer if you wanted. cow.

[EMP]

this is a really gorgeous poem, like bethan i liked the message given in the first verse, i didn't cry though like her :P it's a brilliant poem though, "so the tears drip into my ears (rhyme) among these twisted blankets, which smell like you" awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. :( *favourites*

[Beatrice Mars]

hmpf.

That made me cry. Soo sweet and heartbreaking and I like the message in the first stanza..(I don't know the technical term for it sorry...)

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