Shiny, Shiny

I just spat out all my insides

Spat them all out

On the floor

Of your shiny kitchen

 

Now a camera

Two plectrums

A string of beads

A memory stick

And three purple hair slides

Cover your (shiny, shiny)

Floor

All mixed up with yards

Of tinsel and burgundy ribbon

 

I kneel on the glittering tiles

And everything around me

Sparkles

In your (shiny, shiny) kitchen

 

Everything...

Even you

 

(Looks like someone

Dropped you in gold dust)

Reviews

[mope]

I love the sentiment, the style, and the wide grin catch-light confusion.
:)

[Mischa Keats]

This was absolutely beautiful, and maybe one of my favorite poems. Ever. However:
Now a camera

Two plectrums

A string of beads

A memory stick

And three purple hair slides

Cover your (shiny, shiny)


was very confusing to read for me.
But I loooved this.

[EMP]

"looks like someone dropped you in gold dust" nomnomnom i love this.
again, reeeally good vivid imagery "kneel on the glittering tiles and everything around me sparkles"